Grade-Level Standards:
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6.H.2.3 Analyze the development and cultural contributions including large-scale empires and major religions
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Student Friendly Language:
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I can evaluate multiple causes of events and developments, with an emphasis on large empires and major religions.
I can break into parts for examination, the development and cultural contributions of large-scale empires and major religions.
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A similar awkward sentence- bold is my change- italics is the original. The bold is dimension 2 wording from the C3 Framework. Let me know what you think.
***I believe this could be a note for the editing of the standards themselves but shouldn't it be "Analyze the development and cultural contributions OF large-scale empires and major religions"?
ReplyDeleteAgain, this is SFL. So it's okay to be friedly with the language I think.
E.g. I can explain what large empires contributed to evolving societies
I can identify cultural events/ideas/artifacts that impacted society
I like either of yours better than the original.
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